इत्तेफाक से जो मिल जाओ अगर
तो मत पूछना वही अनकहे सवाल निगाहों से....
क्योंकि मेरी खामोशी फिर तुम्हे तोड़ देगी,
और मैं बिखर जाउंगी अपने जवाबो को समेटते समेटते.................!
Awesome, now i'm feeling a very good flow of emotions & words. Really u've done a very good combination. Excellent poem. Pls ho sake to ye word verification hata lijiye taaki comment dene me asaani rahe...
muche lagta hai paharo me hi o takat hai jo insan ko kavi bana deti hai.nice poem jara mere blog pe bhi najar mare
y nt u continue ur writing ....gud poems are they are telling the untold stories..Keep it up
first 2 lines remind of some thing...and last 2 give its answer....Gr8 work....r r really dng wellGod bless u...
you started in 2008 and have travelled the path at an exceptionally faster pace. Maintain this confidence and fidelity of thought and expression.Paritoshkuchtokahoyaar@blogspot.com
that is smal but very sweet poem .. nice work .. keep going .. :)
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Awesome, now i'm feeling a very good flow of emotions & words. Really u've done a very good combination. Excellent poem. Pls ho sake to ye word verification hata lijiye taaki comment dene me asaani rahe...
muche lagta hai paharo me hi o takat hai jo insan ko kavi bana deti hai.nice poem jara mere blog pe bhi najar mare
y nt u continue ur writing ....
gud poems are they are telling the untold stories..
Keep it up
first 2 lines remind of some thing...
and last 2 give its answer....
Gr8 work....r r really dng well
God bless u...
you started in 2008 and have travelled the path at an exceptionally faster pace. Maintain this confidence and fidelity of thought and expression.
Paritosh
kuchtokahoyaar@blogspot.com
that is smal but very sweet poem .. nice work .. keep going .. :)
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